Wednesday, October 17, 2007

Add some pizzazz

1.) The candy dish sat on the counter.

The candy dish, overflowing with colorful candy of all shapes and sizes, sat on the counter.

2.) Hubert ran to the store to get a block of cheese.

Hubert, suddenly hungry for a grilled cheese sandwich, ran to the store to get a block of cheese.

3.) Ivan worried, about his job and his coworkers, his family problems, and most of all about school, his worry keeping him awake tossing and turning all night.

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