Monday, October 15, 2007

Sentence Variety

This was a really hard assignment!

1.) Some shoes are expensive.
Different, unique colors, style designs, and designers, are all factors that make some shoes expensive.

2.) Now, however, my views have changed.
Now, however, my views have changed considerably towards my shoes in the way that I view them and their different, unique qualities.

3.) By the end of the school year, my shoes were completely worn out from continual use and wear.
By the end of the school year, my shoes, scuffed and full of holes, were completely worn out from continual use and wear.

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